Early Spock and Jim Relationship Building

[inthewind101.livejournal.com]

Ok, I am new here and really happy to have found this place. I am looking FICs that focus on the early building of Jim and Spock's relationship.

1) Relationship has rocky or unsure or antagonistic start but they learn over time how to relate and get along (and maybe that they love each other)
2) So I love slash Kirk/Spock but this is not a requirement--the friendship/pre-slash building is the important part
3) TOS or AU is fine
4) The longer the FIC the better
5) Slow builds own my soul

Examples of this would be like
TOS Progression by KCS Friendship non-slash (a 5 times/1 time story)
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5685231/1/Progression

or

AU Observations by Anon-J-Anon
This FIC is like over 400 k words and the first 120k are pure relationship building and its so wonderful.
http://anon-j-anon.livejournal.com/30674.html

BONUS Points: If there is smart! kirk (but not super!), protective!ness, and awesome bridge crew, & Spock narrator

PLEASE NO uhura bashing! (love how its handled in Observations)

Much love and thanks for your time and energy! 

Comments

[missbamf90.livejournal.com]

oh, and here are some more! I also like a slow build. Feel the burn!

Veritas by TheProblematique. a little bit on the fluffy side, but it's about 186k and complete, and kirk and spock are both pining fools in it ;)
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6168884/1/Veritas

Atlas by Angel Baby1; it does feature a believable smart kirk, and was also a slow build.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5344838/1/Atlas

and finally..."Home" by Lanaea. Also a very slow build, and also a WIP and probably will remain that way; but I feel that where the author left it, it could have ended. It was actually the fic that converted me to the K/S pairing.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5071703/1/Home

[inthewind101.livejournal.com]

I love Atlas. I will have to check out Veritas (seen the name around b4) and heard good things about "Home." WIP make me nervous. Is the ending happy? does it end GEN or Slash?

[missbamf90.livejournal.com]

it starts off with them friends, but does end with slash. There was a plot point she introduce when she stopped updating, but as I said, and as many of the reviewers also feel; the story could end happily where she left off. There is no graphic sex scenes though, so if that's a must...I would steer clear. Other than that, it's well worth the read. Veritas is amazing, definitely check it out.

thanks for following up

[(Anonymous)]

There does not need to be graphic sex or anything (though that has its own place I suppose). I care mostly about the story and to know that there is a decent ending even if all plot theards are not tied up.

Re: thanks for following up

[missbamf90.livejournal.com]

then I think it would be perfect! Sorry, I felt the need to point out the sex thing. I've seen some K/S fics get slammed for not having sex scenes (why in the world people would complain to the author about their choice to write sex is beyond me) but I wasn't sure if that was a must for you. I to, don't have to have a sex scene to enjoy a story. In fact, in some instances, it can take away from it.

Re: thanks for following up

[inthewind101.livejournal.com]

That comment before was from me. Not sure why it did not show my user name. I so agree with your comment here. I have notice lots of fics get a lower reviews for lack of sex but the important is the story. Random forced sex can detract from a great story if it just there as a token scene. Every part do the story must have some thing emotional point/something at stake/something driving/some consequence because otherwise it wastes of screen time. Not that is not to say sexual scenes have no place or value, but they need to be employed in meaningful ways. Sometimes a simple kiss or holding can be far more meaningful/intament/powerful/more rewarding than tons of graphic sex scenes.

For example "as wise we grow" handled it so utterly perfectly. There is a reason it is a hallmark of this fandom.

Re: thanks for following up

[missbamf90.livejournal.com]

I totally agree with you! sex can really cheapen a fic for me, if it's not used correctly. Sex, to me, has to be built up too, and handled delicately. And you're right, sometimes a simple gesture is all a scene needs to make it perfect. I have not read so wise we grow, but i hear great things. I really need to read it, like yesterday, lol.

Re: thanks for following up

[inthewind101.livejournal.com]

Drop what you are doing (assuming not holding a child or expensive object) and go read this ASAP.

You will be so pleased I promise. For tie length, insight, character development, pacing, oc, natural progression of k/s relationship and all around awesomeness. It is a stunning story that gets better with every reread.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/55410/chapters/73479